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So I suppose when you told me you loved me,
You were too high to mean it. (every single time)
And I guess when she told me she understood,
She was too drunk to remember.

I’m tired of hearing your excuses,
I’m tired of getting hurt,
I’m tired of all this false hope
Clouding my judgement.

Now I’m free… to say just how I feel
I’m free… to make decisions
About me… and you can’t change me
Not me… No not me… not me…

So I suppose when you told her you loved her,
You really meant it. (every single time)
And I guess when she told you the same back,
She believed it was real.

I’m tired of watching you fight,
I’m tired of hurting when I see her cry,
I’m tired of all this love and pain
Clouding my mind.

Now I’m free… to say just how I feel
Free… to make decisions
About me… and you can’t change me
Not me… Not this time… not this time…

So I suppose when you say that you’re sick of it,
You never mean it (not a single time)
And I guess when she tells me she can’t make it work,
She’ll change her mind by the morning.

I’m tired of playing Frisbee
With what’s left of my heart,
It’s not fair, I don’t need to hear this,
..Every single time.

I’m gonna be free… to do just what I want
I’ll be free… to make grown-up decisions
About me… and you can’t change me
Not me… Not again… mm… not again…

So I suppose when I told her I loved you,
I shouldn’t have meant it.
And I guess when I told her, I should have held it in,
But it’s not like she remembers.

I’m tired of walking away from you,
I’m tired of running right back again
Every single time she calls,
Just to try to help you.

I’ll never be free… to tell you how I feel
Never Free… to show I’ve made decisions
About me… I guess you don’t want me
Not me… No not me… not me…

Not me.
©2007-2009 ~tulzdavampslayer
:icontulzdavampslayer:

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Okay. So I forgot I wrote this, and it was only a couple of weeks ago. Sigh. Idiot.

I quite like this, but at the same time hate it with a fiery passion. I like the melody though, which of course you can't actually hear...

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This would work as a song. like, one singing really.. painfully and the other screaming back at her.. like a BITCH FIGHT to the extreme.. Ripping the shit out of each others voices by the end?

It may have inspired a backlash of emotion.

not joking, you made me cry today. And feel very, very unwell. Its not nice to incite these feelings.

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-Elly- was Here.
:iconcloudrat:
It is a very raw piece but think this it is quite pleasant.

In particular the line, "I’m tired of playing Frisbee with what’s left of my heart." It brings a lot of images and I think it is something that people can relate to.

Keep up the good work. Crafting of copy is never an easy thing and takes a lot of time. Lord knows it would make my job easier.

--
Cloud Rat

"Where the spirit does not work with the hand there is no art." - Leonardo da Vinci.

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:icontulzdavampslayer:
yeah when I wrote the frisbee line I remember thinking "dude, lame!" but now I like it.

Thanks a lot!

--
If you say you're right, then you must be right. But I still refuse to believe in you.

What's that you say? You know my faults? You have the cure?

(You are the poison)
:icontulzdavampslayer:
....dammit. I'm sorry for making you cry.

I didn't mean to.

Damn, now I need to go hit my head against a wall so I'm less stupid.

--
If you say you're right, then you must be right. But I still refuse to believe in you.

What's that you say? You know my faults? You have the cure?

(You are the poison)

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